Thursday, July 14, 2011

Hi there,this poured out of me before.can i get an opinon please and thanks?

Poetry doesn't pour out of you. The raw material for poetry pours out of you and then you have to make something out of it. This "poem" has very little literal referential meaning. It has a very poor sense of grammar and spelling, and it would be virtually impossible for a reader to determine what you mean by it. It's like, "Spasms of inequity flailing the wyverns/ Yellow streaks of stimpled Lexus wandering fro."

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